[Crazy9] Shouko to Yuuji to NTR
She’s as scary as usual 😀
So, here’s another commission from dj-moe. This time doujin on Baka to Test to Shoukanjuu.
Shouko is being yandere and she ties Yuuji, but she overdid it and she can’t get him to ‘stand’ xD
Uhh, I like Shouko in Crazy9 style ^__^
You probably already know it, but it’s a NTR.
UP / DF / dj-moe
PS: Raikoh added some notes and to my sadness, made blood look like some moisture ;__; And I forgot to style one line :X Strange, how proofreader and buyer hadn’t noticed that 😛
Version with blood: US / UP / DF
@Unimportant Poster
Well no offense "Unimportant Poster" but that up to the commissoner if the want the content edited. If your not happy with it then simply find the raw of the content in question and commision someone to translate it for you. Also you complaint is mute because the unedited (bloody page) version was placed in the link above…
Am i the only one pissed about the blood edit? I mean sure, its ok to clean up the pages but editing the actual content just because the editor "feels like doing it" its just lame. It like deleting the pages with the rape part because the editor "feels like having a happy ending".
I really enjoy the work you guys do, but please dont edit the content like that again.
Ok this one didn't made a dent in me even though my most hated genre is NTR maybe it's just because i watched to much Triangle Blue. Oh well thnx for translating this one, i'll probably delete it once i finish reading it since the only reason i read NTR is if it's from my favorite artists or if it has great artwork.
@Fatjoe
Heh…. Already read it. It was so absurd that it was funny to me lol. Gave me a good laugh. In any case, it's off to 4chan I go to look for this Gothic Lolita piece.
I can sort of agree that the complaints get old. In some places, you won't be able to count the number of people declaring their desire to find a way to kill a fictitious character, or how many people suddenly develop ED from netorare crap. So long as it's labeled clearly, and honestly, that's fine. The worst comments come when the people go in not knowing what to expect.
I understand why people get upset, and agree. If you hear a story in another genre or real life about a guy who's head-over-heels in love with his girlfriend finding her with some other guy, in most situations many people would side with the guy and hate the girl.
Still, best to make sure the NTR is very, very clear. Some might even come in because some people use the term more loosely than others, and they think there might be some hope. The story might turn somewhere along the way. There's a piece by an author called Nekotasou in February's Comic LO that I saw, and almost closed it after a couple pages thinking it was this. Sometimes it's really not torare though. Would be nice to see some stuff like that after stuff like this.
@Anonymous
In my defense I was just bitching about an ending to anime (which still pisses me off). Both the death and ending were totally unexpected (and unnecassary). Complaining about NTR is another story. The genre is clearly labeled, but people still want to bitch about it like it was forced on them :/
@Afro Thunda
You might want to check out 4chan's board, because I saved the whole thing one pic at a time. Also I doubt the doujin would met your standerds of being fuck up. Hell I have no problem reading. Now this one doujin I saw, might satisfy your guro intake. Didn't read it but the describtion was pretty fucked up. Basically the two women love playing in shit, but they take it to the next level. The next level includes cutting each other up and putting shit in their wounds. Wouldn't look at it if somebody paid me, but I'm sure you wouldn't mind checking it out (if you haven't seen it).
I don't know what's so surprising in people raging over NTR, when it's obviously what the genre is aiming at. That's like expecting people not to be disgusted by scat. Also the art is really good so many will probably read it even though they know it might not be their cup of tea.
When I know there's NTR I just skip first few pages that might make me identify with MC (or otherwise make effort not to) and I'm fine. If I didn' though, I can sure see it making me angry because I'm a sucker for happy endings. I'm also disappointed at how little decent quality mindbreak stuff there is nowdays that doesn't involve NTR (lol "happy" mindbreaks, I know).
As for this doujin in particular, I don't know how this "isn't really that bad" with last panel like that, but I guess I've already had it with people wanting to sit on two chairs at the same time IRL to just dismiss it as irrelevant.
@biri
I lol'd hard when I saw that comment too. It's the same kind of comments that popped up when the NTR genre found it's way on to FAKKU. And since FAKKU pretty much caters to the Vanilla crowd, people were losing their minds after experiencing an NTR story for the first time. And the funny thing about this doujin is, this isn't even the worst the NTR genre has to offer. Epic lulz will be had if those guys ever come across any of Sanbun Kyoden's works.
@Fatjoe
You wouldn't happen to have a download link for all 3 parts of that story, would you? If not, I'll just scour 4chan's RS board and see if I can find it. The claim of "Most Fucked Up NTR I've Ever Seen" is like a recommendation to me lol. Also, content sounds relevant to my interests, so it's a must for me to read it.
It didn't really piss me off because it had magic and demons and shit, and because thankfully she died horribly in the end. Her cutting open her stomach to put the blonde bitch's baby inside her was more fucked up than the scene with her weird as fuck brother.
Anyway, "If you don't like it don't read it" is the rational approach, but you're on the internet, and if there are comment sections you're going to get replies. Is it really so hard to believe that fiction can bring out emotions in people, especially in genres so ripe with wish fulfilment like H? Fatjoe was tight over Phantom a while ago (which came from an eroge) but I didn't tell him to "grow up" lol
@biri
No Problem. Figured you might enjoy the full story (ending quite good). Rarely do I enjoy dark stories with Gothic lolitas XD
@Fatjoe
Hah, I didn't notice. Well, to be honest, you could imagine how much time I have for reading other works, can you? *busy translating another work atm ^^' * I may check on it later, when I find some free time 😉
@biri
If your interested their are three parts to that story. The link I have above is to the second part. The link to the other parts are actually located in the link.
@Fatjoe
Maybe I missed something, but she calls the woman "onee-sama" and she's drinking that cocktail made from her virgin blood, Nosferatu's sperm and brain of her brother (makes me wonder what author wanted to say by this recipe xD), but I didn't notice her dying.
@biri
I swear Biri that teenagers must visit that site lol. That comment is proof of that. Also the violence wasnt what made that doujin interesting, but the mindfuck situations in it. It was sad that Kiyoko killed her bro (in pt 2), but called out for him when she died (in pt3). Basically its that type of love you can only find in doujins without happy sex.
@Fatjoe
Nothing really violent to be honest 😛 I really liked the part where Kiyoko is laying tied up on the table and the Nosferatu is taking off her panties and the very last page, where she sits in all the blood with that mistress~ I think I have the thing for gothic lolitas 😉
@Raikoh
People whine about ntr, but they still read it – that's something I can't comprehend ;D It's like reading some piece with title like "futanari onee-san" or whatever and whine about being turned off by the futa part o__O
Also, did you notice, guys? The fatso is the same as in "Natsuru no Baai"~
@Afro Thunda
Sure, that's why I like doing various of things.
Also, to fans of Touhou – I found a piece called "Neko, Nezumi, Neko" by Nya-to Hidamari… it looks pretty nice… is anyone interested in it? *wink wink*
Also, quoting one comment on this piece from dj-moe:
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From: Angry Guy on 2010-05-09 16:53:56
Doujin moe, please just fucking remove this stupid gay story from this site, it´s so pissing me off !! My boner died ! Ò__Ó
*loled hard*
Here is one of the most fuck up NTR i've ever seen:
http://exhentai.org/g/69380/a638c6d638/
I does end in MURDER, so you have been warned lol
@Raikoh
That is the NTR genre for you. It seems to have taken a life of it's own. NTR seems to hit just the right emotional spot in some people and it makes them flip out. The idea of having your woman "stolen" from you by a good dicking really puts people off (clearly). You can't help it if some people aren't thick skinned enough to handle this genre. Anyway, reading those comments makes me laugh so I'll have to venture over to Doujin-Moe and entertain myself a little.
@biri
You can't cater to everyone's tender sensibilities. So being a fan of Darker material, I'll be looking forward to Egao's new doujin. You know honestly, I think a lot of H-manga readers would rather read a Rape doujin/manga over an NTR doujin/manga anytime if they could only choose one or the other lol.
The story hasn't been altered at all, I just made a long streak of blood in one panel lighter colored to make it less vicious–sure virgins bleed, but that was just a bit much. You're free to still interpret the panel as being blood though if you find blood more arousing.
I'm just surprised at all the anti-NTR (netorare) whining comments though, I mean wow, is it really that offensive to people? I thought they'd be whining more about the fat-nerd-guy than anything else.
@Fatjoe
Oh believe me that here's quiet – when I read comments on dj-moe about people ready to cut their veins or stab Shouko, I realized that people are just whining weaklings 😀 It makes me wonder what will happen, when I publish another Egao's doujin in a week or two 😀
@Anonymous
I don't alter the story or images, my work is to deliver what artist created 😛
*Checks Comments for NTR whining*
Seems like its safe for now…anyway now I have to check out the anime XD
Thanx Afro Thunda.
@Anonymous
Biribiri didn't alter the story, Raikoh did. You'd have ask Raikoh about it.
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Ehud :
Many thanx BB and dj-moe for this strange story. Somehow i didn’t connect to it. Too weird for me.
Afro Thunda, are you sure that Goromenz and Yasui Riosuke are the same person?
I'm 100% positive this is the case. Goromenz is the name Yasui Riosuke goes by when he does doujin work.
So why did you alter the story?
Please don't edit blood.
NOO. not NTR, Please!
but, thanks though.
Many thanx BB and dj-moe for this strange story. Somehow i didn't connect to it. Too weird for me.
Afro Thunda, are you sure that Goromenz and Yasui Riosuke are the same person?
And about that line you forgot to style, you're talking about on page 27, right? I thought it was like that because it didn't all fit in the bubble so I didn't mention it. -1 for me lol.
Yup, NTR. But it ain't really the soul crushing, RAGE worthy kind I've come to enjoy since the girl kinda sets herself up. Though it's definitely rough for him seeing his girl have sex in front of him with a fat dude lol. Still, a good, quick read though.
Now, Crazy9's art is fantastic, but the style is nearly identical to Goromenz (a.k.a. Yasui Riosuke). I wonder if Crazy9's done any original work.