[Takatu] The Succubus Lady Next Door Jeers Ch.2
We’re sharing second chapter of the story we did for Raikoh. We did magazine version though and Raikoh found someone to re-edit it into book version. I skimmed through it and found some errors that are not my courtesy (and pages are not leveled). There are included 2 pages of a Prologue that we translated after the book was out as well. Well then, enjoy.
Another fine share that I overlooked the first time posted. My thanks for this one to biri and Raikoh.
@Zathael
Doubt it as it seems it was because Raikoh decided to change some dialogue and wording around when the chapters were re-edited that mistakes (quite a few) were introduced. Why he decided to do that, we'll never know.
And after the time I spent polishing it up and trying to make it mistake-free. Now everyone's gonna think I let all those mistakes get through… That makes me a Sad Panda… A very Sad Panda T_T
@fapfapfap
I am quite sure that Raikoh will eventually share the first chapter reedited onto the tank scans, just like I am sure he will eventually share the whole tank. It will just take some time.
I am a bit disappointed to hear that some editing errors were made with this new chapter though. Hopefully those will be fixed as more of the tank gets translated. Still, thanks a lot biribiri and Raikoh.
Any chance of getting the first chapter reedited on tank scans ?
Raikoh and biribiri, I cannot thank you enough that tonight I will be sleeping the sleep of the dead after I am done reading this fine piece of animated literature…
Awesome. Many thanx BB.
I can see … where it will go
and i like it!
Hooray! Been waiting for this. Are there any more chapters?